23 years on, this principle that elevated environmental, social and governance (ESG) disclosures would lead buyers and different stakeholders to reward firms with robust sustainability efficiency, and punish those that lagged, has gained widespread market acceptance.
Nevertheless, proof to assist this dominant principle of change has been combined, with international emissions persevering with to climb alongside company disclosure charges over the past twenty years.
“It’s easier to say it’s not working, than truly digging out the examples the place it’s,” argued Sherry Madera, CDP’s new head as of final October, citing how the USA retail big Walmart hit its 2030 goal to slash a gigatonne of emissions from its provide chain six years forward of schedule by giving suppliers higher financing phrases in the event that they acquired a excessive rating from CDP.
Madera, who based the Way forward for Sustainable Knowledge Alliance (FoSDA), a worldwide coalition of ESG knowledge suppliers, in 2020 and helmed it till she took up the highest place at CDP, believes that the world is “at that tipping level” the place sustainability knowledge is thought to be “a enterprise necessity on the board degree”.
Momentum has been constructing for the reason that Worldwide Sustainability Requirements Board (ISSB)’s launched its inaugural requirements final 12 months to consolidate the “alphabet soup” of reporting frameworks, from the Taskforce for Local weather-related Monetary Disclosures to the CDP-established Local weather Disclosure Requirements Board.
Over 20 jurisdictions – together with Australia, Japan, Hong Kong, Malaysia, New Zealand, Philippines and Singapore – have since introduced plans to roll out obligatory ISSB-aligned reporting guidelines within the subsequent few years. In April, CDP additionally launched its 2024 company questionnaire, which aimed to simplify disclosures in opposition to a number of environmental points by aligning with the ISSB’s local weather commonplace.
However the brand new format has been criticised by some sustainability practioners for doing simply the alternative because of its size and lack of user-friendliness.
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Sustainability and climate-related knowledge will take the identical path as monetary knowledge over time, which implies that we’re going to have extra interoperability… but we will’t anticipate there to be one commonplace to rule all of them. That will be nice over time, however we don’t even have that with monetary markets.
In a now widely-shared LinkedIn put up, Anastasia Kuskova, chief govt officer (CEO) of Amsterdam-based sustainability knowledge startup Sirius, said that the most recent questionnaire approaches 2,000 pages and over 5,500 questions. Many professionals commenting on her put up shared related sentiments, together with one who complained that “navigating the questionnaire hasn’t change into any simpler” since she began reporting to CDP greater than 5 years in the past.
Rejecting these claims, Madera has maintained that there are simply 450 questions within the questionnaire and “by no means is an organization going to be requested all of them”. Beginning this 12 months, small and medium-sized enterprises (SMEs), or these with below 1,000 full-time staff and US$240 million in annual income, will solely be subjected to about 10 per cent of those questions, she added.
However Madera acknowledges that CDP wants to make sure that the questions it asks, which reap some 2,900 knowledge factors, are “multi-use” so firms can “embrace the truth that it is a optimistic factor that they’re spending cash, effort and assets on, versus being a burden.”
For her, all of it boils down to 3 key use circumstances: entry to capital, enterprise efficiencies and compliance. Madera stated that these use circumstances will decide CDP’s technique for particular person jurisdictions throughout Asia – one in all its quickest rising marketplace for disclosures – which noticed a serious upheaval for executives earlier this 12 months.
Tune in as we focus on:
- Why rising disclosures has not led to extra formidable local weather motion
- How you can carry up the speed of credible transition plan disclosures
- Criticism of the brand new CDP questionnaire
- CDP’s “a lot stronger technique” for Asia post-restructuring
- Will we see additional consolidation of ESG rankings and knowledge suppliers?
- Is the “ESG occasion” is over?
The transcript in full:
How did you are feeling once you have been shortlisted for this new function because the CEO of CDP and what made you say “sure” to the function?
To be trustworthy, I’ve to let you know that it wasn’t one thing I searching for. I had only recently joined Mastercard, operating its public coverage workforce outdoors North America, after having spent a while as chief business and authorities affairs officer on the London Inventory Change Group (LSEG).
Then somebody forwarded me this job description from CDP – an organisation that I’ve recognized for a few years. I stated, “You understand what? I’m completely comfortable.” Then I received 4 extra forwards from 4 completely different folks. That was 5 folks general. And I believed, “If different folks suppose this is likely to be match, perhaps I ought to discover it.”
There have been a few issues that basically drew me to it. First, is the unimaginable heritage of CDP doing one thing I actually consider in, which is that knowledge is an unlocker for making optimistic local weather change. The second is my very own background: I’ve lived in China for 3 years and I used to be the financial ambassador to Asia for the Metropolis of London for various years. Asia is in my blood. The Asian markets are so extremely fascinating and thrilling and the board of trustees additionally believes that at CDP. I’m certain we’ll discuss this, however there’s no such factor as “Asia”, it is advisable to get a lot deeper into what every nation is doing.
A latest MSCI report revealed that regardless of Asia’s rising price of company disclosures within the final decade, 20 of the most important Asian utilities are nonetheless approach off observe from internet zero emissions pathways. Does this disconnect between local weather reporting and precise motion counsel there are cracks within the dominant principle of change, the place target-setting and disclosures are supposed to result in extra formidable local weather motion?
What you’re actually getting at, which I really like, is that knowledge is simply not for knowledge’s sake. We need to guarantee that disclosures are transferring in the direction of motion. So that you’re asking about these firms who’re enormous emitters and I believe that you’re completely spot on once you discuss what instruments may now we have to start out transferring from disclosures to motion.
Having a transition plan is a large matter in the intervening time. The fact is that to have a transition plan, you must have a goal and a baseline. Then you want to have the ability to observe in opposition to it 12 months on 12 months, as a result of even in case you set a goal and also you by no means observe in the direction of it, it means nothing.
At CDP, we’ve made an try and outline what a reputable transition plan is likely to be on the idea of disclosures and we’ve chosen 21 knowledge factors that we will affiliate with a reputable transition plan. Now, I’ll let you know the dangerous information: lower than 1 per cent of all of our disclosure universe has credible transition plans. So we have to begin seeing why that’s the case and constructing capability.
What do you suppose is required to carry up the numbers? ISSB has simply taken over the function of standardising the reporting of company transition plans – will that assist and what else is required?
I do suppose that ISSB taking the Transition Plan Taskforce’s work below its wing to incorporate that in disclosures is a large step.
How can we carry that 1 per cent up nearer to 100 per cent? That’s the quantity we wish to see. We simply can’t preserve asking extra questions. What we have to do is to seek out methods of creating questions that we ask multi-use, for firms to embrace the truth that it is a optimistic factor that they’re spending cash, effort and assets on, versus being a burden.
To be clear, CDP is right here to floor new data and to carry credible, comparable data into {the marketplace}. We’re not right here to guage. We’re right here to assist commonplace setters and the use case for all the info that we’re amassing. You’d be shocked how a lot one piece of knowledge can be utilized in a number of methods.
Have there been concrete research which have proven that firms who take into consideration reporting a sure approach are likely to provide you with higher transition plans and to behave on them?
Sure, one of many different statistics – and I’ll make this extra Asia-specific – is “A Checklist” firms. So CDP additionally scores firms on the idea of transparency. These 21 knowledge factors that I spoke about usually are not some separate factor. They’re now all a part of a single CDP questionnaire, as of this 12 months. In Singapore, the A Checklist firms grew from one to 3 over the past 12 months. We’re seeing that uplift in lots of locations around the globe.
There are 174 A Checklist firms throughout Asia, which is about 40 per cent of all the A Checklist globally. Embedded in that “A” implies that they’re disclosing in opposition to some or all of these transition questions. There’s an actual profit there when it comes to with the ability to be extra clear. It’s not simply so to say that you’ve got a CDP “A”, the purpose there’s to point out management in transparency is being rewarded in different markets.
If I’m a chief monetary officer (CFO) of one of many A Checklist firms, I can take that to my financiers and be capable to negotiate a decrease value of capital as a result of increased transparency is ready to yield a greater overview of threat. The banking and finance group are all about that.
I did need to go into the brand new questionnaire, which was meant to streamline reporting. However I’ve seen that it’s approaching 2,000 pages with over 5,000 questions. That’s quite a bit. What have you ever been listening to from firms and what’s been the progress within the uptake to this point?
We’re tremendous proud that it’s one questionnaire, versus three separate questionnaires. Final 12 months, there was a rise in uptake of all three questionnaires for local weather, water and forests. However what we heard and listened to was that the market needed to de-duplicate among the questions and create some streamlining, which I believe we positively achieved.
I need to debunk the parable that there are 5,000 questions or whatnot. There are 450 questions and by no means is an organization going to be requested all of them. Our evaluation of what questions firms get are on the idea of what authorities working with CDP are requesting.
In a big worth chain, they might be asking particular questions resembling, what kind of market you’re in, in case you’re impacting water and forestry. That is an related query set that buyers, prospects and firms themselves would love answered.
The 450 questions yield about 2,900 knowledge factors. As a result of when you concentrate on the questions, there could be drop down menus, there could be extra data that goes there, in order that’s the place issues begin mushrooming out. That is the primary 12 months that CDP has been in a position to have an online-based system to gather the info and to ask the questions. Does that imply that’s the best way it’s from right here occurring? No, completely not. Step one is to guarantee that we’re digitised.
One of many causes I joined CDP was so it’s in a position to put money into itself in an effort to sustain with the ecosystem because it stands proper now. 23 years in the past, CDP created the ecosystem to gather local weather knowledge. It’s now enormous. So we have to now catch up by investing in a system that’s going to be much more match for objective going ahead. We’re working actually arduous to capability construct with firms which can be investing their time, vitality and assets this 12 months to consistently enhance. However I believe we’ll see a much bigger step change even subsequent 12 months as we usher in all of these commentary and be capable to simplify.
Is there a bias in the direction of bigger firms versus SMEs, which can not be capable to afford a devoted workforce to report on all these completely different knowledge factors and due to this fact don’t have a good shot at getting higher ESG ranking as in comparison with their bigger and extra well-resourced counterparts?
So this 12 months we launched an SME questionnaire. You stated 450 questions remains to be quite a bit. What if I stated that you simply solely must do about 10 per cent of that for an SME questionnaire, which in keeping with our analysis, is the extent that’s palatable?
As soon as we’ve received established, international listed firms which can be already very acquainted with CDP, our job is to guarantee that the remainder of the market can be how one can disclose, especifically once we discuss Scope 3 emissions, once we discuss in regards to the worth chain and once we discuss provide chains. These firms which can be feeding into the world’s largest firms are smaller. So with the ability to discover a approach for them to step up into the disclosure world is our goal.
Coming again Asia, I did need to ask about CDP’s restructuring below your management to this point. My colleague reported on how sure regional roles prior to now 12 months have been scrapped in favour of worldwide practical roles, which noticed a number of senior executives within the area depart. However I additionally noticed that there was a brand new job posting just lately for a enterprise growth director function. Does this sign a return to regional roles?
I’m going to return again to one thing I stated to you earlier on this dialogue. There isn’t a such factor as Asia. It’s essential to take into consideration what every market wants to have the ability to achieve success when it comes to the wants, necessities and sectors.
We’ve taken the time to try this. We’ve introduced in exterior consultants, mined our inside data and requested {the marketplace}. I’m delighted that you simply’ve seen that we’re hiring for an Asia -based enterprise growth lead who will report on to me on the high desk as a result of It’s completely important for us to have the ability to guarantee that we’re servicing that market. It’s one in all our highest progress markets, the place disclosures are being pushed by two enormous components.
One is buyers and the second is patrons or the availability chain house owners around the globe. CDP works with 340 of the world’s largest provide chain members, representing US$6.5 trillion price of shopping for energy. A variety of it’s shopping for from Asia. So for us, we have to guarantee that our workforce is nicely skilled and actually targeted on how one can transfer rapidly and successfully by Asia, and I’m actually enthusiastic about this rent.
However why that personnel change when it looks as if a reasonably related type of function to what among the earlier executives have been doing?
What I’d say isn’t any man steps in the identical river twice. Each the person and the river have modified. So it could look on paper like that job is identical. The fact is that now we have a a lot stronger technique throughout Asia and when it comes to expertise and we’re searching for somebody who’s actually going to get on the market and be client-facing, customer-facing, regulator-facing, and actually be capable to hone in on how our progress works going ahead in that area.
Possibly you’ll be able to stroll me by the longer term plans that you’ve got for Asia? How the river has modified, how the person has modified and the way the markets differ, since you have been alluding to how there’s nobody Asia?
I need to take a half step again so as to have the ability to reply your query. I preserve saying that knowledge shouldn’t be for knowledge’s sake and that knowledge must be used. So used how proper? We want to consider that earlier than we will begin fascinated about how that applies to the completely different nations inside the Asia area.
I see it as being three important use circumstances for the CFO, the CEO and the board to say, “sure, I’m going to take a position this cash in with the ability to useful resource local weather knowledge”. These three makes use of are: entry to capital, enterprise efficiencies and compliance.
Entry to capital is fairly easy. Your investor, be {that a} public or non-public investor, be {that a} mortgage portfolio or fairness, is more and more looking for the info that enables them to grasp dangers and alternatives on the idea of an organization’s impression on local weather.
While you discuss enterprise efficiencies, provide chain house owners, your prospects, are asking for this knowledge. Requests for proposals are more and more together with questions in regards to the local weather and surroundings. Enterprise efficiencies can even embody what your staff are asking you and the way you appeal to expertise.
And the third being compliance. So we touched on how Singapore has adopted ISSB going ahead. Many different nations around the globe are doing the identical. More and more ISSB is getting used as a baseline.
Then we we put that into the Asia area. Our second largest market on this planet for disclosures is China and our third largest marketplace for disclosers is Japan. For China, it’s a compelling use case to have the ability to service your buyer. The provision chain house owners around the globe that work carefully with CDP are making requests and that’s driving the most important progress in China. I’m not saying that entry to capital and compliance usually are not additionally of curiosity, however the greatest driver is prospects.
It’s different in Japan. In Japan, it’s buyers and compliance. Already, the stewardship requirements in Japan are making firms begin fascinated about what knowledge they should observe internally to minimise their dangers – not solely from a regulatory surroundings, but in addition how they do enterprise internationally. I’d by no means heard a lot in regards to the Carbon Border Adjustment Mechanism (CBAM) from Europe, as after I was travelling in Japan and Southeast Asia.
A part of what we’ve been doing is to consider what the info is getting used for and the way our reference to {the marketplace} shouldn’t be solely encouraging disclosure, however talking to the CFO, the board and the shareholders, to say that that is core to what you are promoting, you’ll be able to drive higher efficiencies and you may win extra enterprise. That message is sort of completely different, maybe, examine to what CDP had been saying to the market earlier than. And that shift takes a bit little bit of time. In order that’s why we’re prepared for some nice new hires within the area, to have the ability to companion extra utterly.
Let me provide you with instance. In India, we’re rising nearly 100 per cent 12 months on 12 months and quite a lot of that has to do with SMEs. So we’ve partnered with a enterprise group in India, Federation of Indian Chambers of Commerce & Business (FICCI), to roll out the capability constructing for our SME questionnaire. It’s not that we’re ignoring bigger firms, however we see that as being the most important accelerator to drive transparency in India. So all of these forms of tactical in addition to robust partnership-based approaches must be seen nation by nation.
I’m nonetheless questioning about the entire principle of change. When will we begin seeing actual decarbonisation? As a result of disclosures have elevated and now we have much more knowledge now, however excessive emitters haven’t actually modified the best way they do enterprise prior to now decade.
Let me provide you with some examples that we’re taking delight in, as a result of, in case you don’t thoughts me saying, I suppose it’s simpler to say it’s not working, than truly digging out the examples the place it is. I’ll provide you with an instance. We work very carefully with Walmart, which has an infinite international provide chain.Collectively, with us and different companions, they put collectively a plan referred to as “Challenge Gigatonne” in 2020 to take away a gigatonne of carbon emissions from the surroundings by 2030. Earlier this 12 months, Walmart introduced that it has reached its goal.
What does this imply? Because of this Walmart was monitoring the emissions that got here from its provide chain. The most important hurdle for decarbonising is usually present in your Scope 3. Walmart didn’t simply observe its emissions, but in addition found out the place the ache factors have been inside its personal provide chain to do some capability constructing with its suppliers.
There’s all the time that menace of adjusting suppliers, however what Walmart did was to teach and produce companions alongside to say, “Nicely, in case you’re going to vary your vitality combine to renewables, that’s going to take an funding. How about we usher in some decrease value of capital by the banking system in an effort to facilitate that change for you, in order that once you truly report again into us, we’re going to see that your vitality combine is considerably decarbonising?”
It is a nice instance of how in case you don’t have that knowledge, you’ll not know which one in all your suppliers you need to discuss to. Neither will the banks or financiers be capable to actually perceive that this firm’s purchaser is asking for this modification, and with the ability to put money into that’s truly a reasonably safe funding.
It looks as if the businesses themselves additionally must be further dedicated to utilizing that knowledge as a leverage for decarbonisation. However to this point it’s nearly like simply compliance or box-ticking, proper?
We do must be cognizant of the truth that making change to a enterprise course of, it doesn’t matter what enterprise you’re in, within the hard-to-abate sectors or as a consulting agency, prices cash.
In order any enterprise chief would say, “what’s my return on funding?” Regulation, fines or compliance breaches, are causes you’re going to must make a change as a result of your return on funding might be increased in case you’re truly in compliance.
Furthermore, in case your buyer goes to say, “I can’t purchase from you anymore”, that’s a reasonably compelling cause to make an funding. The purpose I’m making is: we can’t overlook that it’s an funding. So a part of the capability constructing we have to do if we need to see the change is to analyze what that return on funding realistically is over a timeframe that’s maybe a bit longer than among the CFOs often take into consideration.
This isn’t a quarterly cycle return on funding. It is a one, 5, 10-year return on funding. However that’s the place the actual profit comes. As a result of in case you’re going to make a serious change to your vitality combine, you’re going to reap the rewards for a few years to return. However that upfront value is one thing that we’d like to consider how we finance well.
To this point that the hyperlink to the returns on funding from disclosures remains to be tenuous. Is that one thing that CDP is attempting to quantify?
Sure, and there are some quite simple examples as nicely. A lot of our A Checklist firms report getting a decrease value of capital if 12 months on 12 months, they preserve their CDP A Checklist designation. That perhaps lowers their value of capital by just a few foundation factors or 10 foundation factors, however in multinational firms, this makes a giant distinction.
We’re additionally seeing that stretch down into the ecosystem that they work in. So, firms that open up to CDP or have certain knowledge factors which can be above thresholds that bankers, financiers or patrons put into place will get an actual monetary acquire by provide chain finance merchandise. I’m enthusiastic about all of those little items, as a result of it’s not simply in regards to the large image sustainable finance.
We’ve talked quite a bit about ESG funds prior to now or sustainable finance writ massive. When it turns into sensible, that’s when firms begin saying, the place’s the draw back? Truly, the upside is sort of monetary. This knowledge that we’re gaining can not solely be used for compliance, it’s used additionally for that entry to capital and enterprise efficiencies. In case you have your Scope 1 and Scope 2 emissions, you solely want to write down it one time and also you get to make use of it many instances. Then that return on funding when it comes to your individual reporting burden goes down since you’re seeing the place these advantages are, not simply to contribute to a optimistic journey of local weather change, however as a result of it’s truly enterprise crucial.
We’re simply at that tipping level of creating certain that knowledge factors on local weather are being required as a enterprise necessity on the board degree.
You additionally based the Way forward for Sustainable Knowledge Alliance (FoSDA). Earlier this month, Moody’s confirmed that it’s going to not have its standalone ESG rankings enterprise after saying a strategic partnership with MSCI. Will see additional market consolidation on this house within the close to future?
Well, my crystal ball is damaged. However you’re proper. I based FoSDA, which is a bunch of knowledge gamers that primarily serve the monetary business. The members of FoSDA embody S&P World, Bloomberg, Moody’s, LSEG, and a few smaller gamers like Readability AI and Greenomy. CDP, alongside Local weather Bonds Initiative, was one of many founding members of FoSDA.
A couple of years in the past, we counted there have been 734 ESG scores or rankings suppliers. That has come down considerably. I don’t have the quantity, however let’s take into consideration why that’s the case.
CDP was the very first available in the market to create a rating in 2010. The variety of scores we produce has grown considerably since then. I believe that the massive stress on the business are two issues. One is, do you might have a technique that is evident, clear and proven to be helpful within the ecosystem? Do I believe that we’d like 734? Most likely not.
The opposite large issue right here is compliance. Scores around the globe are more and more being regulated. That’s the case in locations like India and the European Union. In order that further compliance burden may imply that it’s extra logical to be extra environment friendly with assets and produce that quantity down.
What are the professionals and cons of getting a smaller variety of ESG gamers sooner or later?
The professionals of getting a number of scores and rankings are that, so long as the methodology is evident and clear, it will probably inform the person one thing completely different. Quite a lot of completely different scores can be utilized collectively as inputs.
Among the cons are that if there isn’t transparency, it will get complicated. A rating may current a straightforward approach, however not the easiest way, to make selections or allocate capital. It’s a instrument. And so long as the instrument is getting used precisely by the market, then greater than a handful could be very helpful. However the factor to recollect right here is {that a} rating is a derivation of the info. The uncooked knowledge is the beginning of all of this.
If CDP continues to do job right here, you’re in a position to make use of that uncooked knowledge, both in your individual modelling by a scoring mechanism or when scores begin getting embedded in different merchandise. So that is turning into a worth chain of the info itself.
It’s identical to monetary knowledge. Monetary knowledge has taken its journey so that you’ve got all the varied completely different constructs, all the best way up into asset administration indices, no matter they occur to be. That methodology, so long as it’s clear, has received a market.
I personally suppose sustainability and climate-related knowledge will take the identical path as monetary knowledge over time, which implies that we’re going to have extra interoperability, we’re going to have a bit extra consolidation, but we will’t anticipate there to be one commonplace to rule all of them. That will be nice over time, however we don’t even have that with monetary markets. So we must be sensible. As an example, for monetary reporting, there’s Worldwide Monetary Reporting Requirements (IFRS) versus Usually Accepted Accounting Rules (GAAP) [where IFRS is used in over 144 countries, but GAAP is used in the US].
As we’re on this journey, CDP’s knowledge can change into that interoperability instrument. In the event you get again right down to the uncooked knowledge that’s being disclosed by the businesses themselves that they’re placing their title to, that turns into very compelling knowledge in an effort to construct scores and evaluation instruments by others within the ecosystem.
There was a latest documentary that the Monetary Instances launched titled, “Who Killed the ESG Celebration?” In your opinion, do you suppose the ESG occasion is over? And if that’s the case, who do you suppose killed it?
I don’t know if any of my colleagues at CDP would have thought of it a celebration. CDP has been round for 23 years, and there was quite a lot of waxing and waning when it comes to curiosity in local weather knowledge. So perhaps this time we will consider it as simply one other cycle that’s being gone by.
When you concentrate on politics and authorities affect, it’s fairly vital on this house, when it comes to prioritisation, and the massive agreements that come out of COP. As we’re seeing how politics is shaping up this 12 months, which is the 12 months the place extra folks will go to the poll field than some other 12 months in historical past, we will solely think about that it is a cycle of what the business and the market are fascinated about ESG.
I don’t suppose that the drive to grasp what our impression is as an organization, as a human, as a metropolis, state, area, authorities, is waning. There’s a actual understanding that issues want to vary. Motion must be taken. So I suppose my level again to you is: how do we all know what change we’d need to make? How do we all know if we’re moving into the proper course? How is it that we all know if we have to course right? You’ll be able to’t make any of these selections in case you would not have 12 months on 12 months tracked knowledge.
You probably did carry up that it’s the 12 months of document elections. There are some actually large elections to look at. The information simply got here out that US president Biden has dropped out and it’s now Kamala Harris, the present vice chairman, who’s going to be operating because the Democrats’ presidential candidate. So what’s the outlook relying on a few of these large elections outcomes, for the approaching years of local weather motion?
I believe there’s two issues that we will watch. One is, what’s being splashed on newspapers and what instructions of journey politicians are moving into. The second is what’s actually taking place, when it comes to companies that may take motion.
One of the crucial essential issues to keep watch over is whether or not knowledge continues to be clear. What CDP is right here to do is to maintain that engine of knowledge 12 months on 12 months being tracked. We may anticipate it to be a bit bit quieter on the headlines from among the world’s greatest firms, as a result of they’re seeing the course of journey of the politicians, governments and economies.
Does that imply that they’re stopping what they’ve been doing for a few years by CDP, which is monitoring, calculating and being clear about their knowledge? Usually that’s not the case. So let’s observe them each. Let’s see what’s occurring within the macro surroundings. Let’s keep watch over what knowledge is continuous to be generated. I’ve nice confidence that the latter goes to proceed at tempo.
The transcript has been edited for brevity and readability.